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My design is not showing after I publish the design. In the last 48 hours things have been COMPLETELY UNACCEPTABLE!
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Hi Mike0696,

Welcome to the Community!

It appears your issue was resolved yesterday by a support representative. Please let us know if you have any other questions.

Thanks,

Chris
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I would like some feedback on my website. All comments welcome. www.expressjustice.com
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Please review my sight and give me ideas for improvement: http://www.pluvinergy.com
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www.brentairpharmacy.com

Hello! This is a web site I designed for a retail independent pharmacy with a front end gift shop. The store sells cosmetics, fragrances, gifts etc. in addition to their over-the-counter products and pharmacy rx prescription services.

I need feedback! Constructive criticism is definitely welcome! What do you think needs change or alteration etc. to make the site more effective to consumers' visual appeal etc.???

Thank you very much!

Michael.

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Hi Michael,

Awesome Website! This is definitely one of the better designs I've seen when it comes to visual appeal. The only thing I can think of is that you should have a brief opening statement welcoming people to the website. Although visually I'm attracted to click through the site to see what products you offer, I don't feel like the site has that personal feel of a local shop in Los Angeles. At first glance I thought you were an online store selling products on a national level.

Your about us page gives off that feel as I now know where your located (Brentwood), how long you've been around (great trust factor), and a better understanding of what you offer. If you could somehow summarize all of that into a few sentences on your homepage, I think it would help users get a better idea of your business.

Hope that helps!

Chris
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Site is beautiful, but you have a major problem! I run the highest speed internet available and it took 22 seconds for your page to fully load. I thought this can't be right, I deleted all of my cookies, ran a speed test on our system and reloaded your page. I got the same results. Industry standards suggest you have 4 seconds to get somebodies attention. Your pictures scroller is really dragging down your load time. If people cant see it in 4 seconds, they are gone and on to the next site.
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Chris, thank you for your feedback! Much appreciated. I agree and have added a welcome statement to the homepage.

Thank you JCBling. I have noticed the same issue with my page load time too and am trying to resolve it because what you said makes good sense about the 4 second industry standard load time. Working on that one :)

Thanks again!

Michael.
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I think the fades are very artistic, however, the daylily gets my attention first but the text fade is great.
Geri
http://www.g2taylor.com
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NEW and improved, check it out: www.BrentAirPharmacy.com
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I would like some feedback on my website. I'm an artist and I would like to get more customers. www.dmgartstudio.com
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Hi Debra. Very nice website - looks professional, easy to navigate and read, easy on the eyes and informative without being crowded. Lovely. I would however work on your blog. I would take out the chat box, I saw a few not so nice random posts.
Johanna
http://www.live-better-holistic-lifes...
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I feel you set it very well. Mentioning that where your work was featured on the visible screen worked out well and so does the "teaser" of your works that encourage the viewer to scroll down.
You may want to group your facebook, twitter and linkedin sites a bit closer together. Also, when I clicked on linkedin.com it did find you.
http://www.g2taylor.com
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Hello Everyone,
Could you please have a look at my website and any feedback would be greatly appericated, as I'm new to all of this. :)
Thanks,
http://www.mindsinspired.com
Chris
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Hi Chris! I'm fascinated by the subject content of your website! This is a subject that is slowly making its way to the scientific community and you are providing a relatively new but very real tool to help unlock those parts of our brains we know to be real but have just begun to understand. With that said, here are some tips:

-Inform your visitors with only the key, important content about what you are providing in as few words as possible because the average visitor will only read headlines and bits of content.

-More visuals! The internet world sees things first, then reads.

-You definitely need some testimonials to build trust. This is new stuff and people unfamiliar with it will like to see what others with first-hand experience with your product have to say.

-If you can keep up with a Blog, it will be a huge advantage for generating traffic to your site because of the unique subject your product represents.

-Place your product at the top of the homepage not at the bottom. After all, its the most important part of your site! I would include a testimonial or two right beside it like the one you have on your products page by C.G. but on the homepage.

Hope this helps and good luck!

Michael.
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Hi Chris. I would suggest not using white text on a black background, it is actually hard on the eyes. I could only spend less than a minute looking at your site before I had to look away. Eye strain could cost you a few potential clients. I would use a softer color, not necessarily white, perhaps a pastel purple to match your logo. Purple is considered a spiritual color, so perhaps that could work in your favor.

Also, the font for the menu "Happiness for Life Our Mission Products" seems a bit large, my first impression is that it was one long sentence, it took me a few seconds to understand that there were 3 links. I would use a smaller font and space the links out a bit.

You should start off with a welcome statement and brief description of what your product is at the top of the site, just before the link to purchase... something like "Welcome to Minds Inspired - offering sound frequency technology to unleash your inner mind" or something catchy while telling your customers what exactly you're selling.

I would also work on streamlining your Mission page. The grammar is a bit off and it's very wordy without telling me much. I would also like to see links to studies that support your claim, some testimonials, and a bit more about the actual technology used to create these CDs - more about the frequencies, is it anything like binaural beats? Honestly, it's just a bit vague and does not inspire trust.
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I had a lot of ads pop up and block your site. Even when I closed them the ads did not go away.
http://www.g2taylor.com
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Greetings:

This is a web site designed for selling Surety Bonds for professionals. Please give me your feedback.

Thank you
www.thebond-express.com
George
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Not my favorite color pallet. The pale flesh tone background does not make me think "professional". Also, perhaps adding a link to your partners' sites would be nice.
Geri
http://www.g2taylor.com
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Vicki Singh

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Hello;

I would like feedback on my site.
www.fitforaking.com
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Johanna6022

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I clicked on your link and it says the domain may be for sale. Is your site up?

Johanna
http://www.live-better-holistic-lifes...
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Geri1158

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It still does.
Geri
http://www.g2taylor.com
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I would like feeback on my site...www.MsLMichelle.com
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Hello Ms L, I like your website, very colorful and fun but I do have a suggestion, to put "Event Producer, MC Hostess..." up higher on your home page. I had to scroll around to find out exactly what you are offering. Your site is easy to navigate and although the white text on black background causes eye strain, it looks good on the home page - however for the Who She Is page I would reverse the colors (white background w/ black text). Good job!
Johanna
http://www.live-better-holistic-lifes...
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I agree with Johanna, you may need to shrink or crop your first image so the entire image is seen when the site opens.
Personally, I like the way you (and I) put the links to facebook, etc. at thet top so, hopefully, people will acknowledge our site whether they scroll down or not.
Geri
http://www.g2taylor.com
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Hello, I am Josee
having some trouble seeing where I can make a mobile web site on homestead.

do not have the icon they are talking about on the homestead site.

used firefox and chrome
Josee
thanks .
http://www.dinosaursudbury.com
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hello
We you simply like your advice and feedback
Sincerely,
http://www.tfs-bra.com/
http://stores.chezmarcellelingerie.co...
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I really like your site, did you design it on your own? I have tried to get the icon on my site and still no luck.
Yes it took me 2 days but I got it.
www.smoovesmovingservicellc.com
Ameer. And thanks for the feed back
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Nice job on tfs-bra.com. The colors and graphics pop and the photos say, "professional".
Space out your fb, youtube, etc. a bit more.
Geri
http://www.g2taylor.com
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Hello

Please let me know what I can improve on with my site
www.sh-impressive-horse-tack.com

Thanks
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This may get a bit complicated.
You need to include a title of your company and find a way to, perhaps, enlarge your artwork (in the top left corner) and fade it into the background or use it somewhere else.
Anyway, it is just something to consider.
Geri
http://www.g2taylor.com
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I've had my site awhile now and think this website review's a good idea ...
check this out www.signs-tsw.com
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It looks good but if you can squeeze your graphic and text so that if fills the screen with the rolling examples (nice work) tease the viewer to make them want to scroll down to see what's going on.
Geri
http://www.g2taylor.com
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http://www.drawingsbywayne.com/

Sign my guestbook! Give me feedback on how to improve my site! tia
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Your site looks good! Great drawings
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You need to do some work on your Services page because the text is off on your prices.
Also, why not put all your work on one page and, since you primarily work in graphite, choose a nice gray tone for your background. The bright colored backgrounds are overwelming your work.
Hey, you're an artist, experiment with it and see if you like it.
Geri
http://www.g2taylor.com
I just finished my web site I have a moving company and would like to compete with the bigger companies. All comments are appreciated.
Ameer
www.smoovesmovingservicellc.com
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Geri1158

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I believe you should have a comma between service and LLC.
Geri
http://www.g2taylor.com
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http://www.forestcitytaxidermy.com
Please give me feedback on how to improve my site!
Thanks
Mario
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Hello TIColl,

I would like to see your advice and feedback...

www.theinternetcollectibles.com
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Very good
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Geri1158

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It took a while to download but the graphics were worth it.
Geri
http://www.g2taylor.com
www.smoovesmovingservicellc.com
I would like to what what step I need to take to make my site better.
Ameer
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I tried but your URL did not work

Sorry

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I am curious why you chose hot pink.
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Mary Ann9990

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I submitted a request to review my website, but haven't seen any posts re: that inquiry. Where do we look to see these comments?
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Joel8316

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I don't see your URL Mary!
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www.titleprofessionals.com
Hope this helps as I am looking for some feedback. Thanks, Joel.
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Mary I enjoyed your site. The blue & the white was a nice contrast together. Everything was informative. I felt I got a feel for your company. Boy, do I have work to do. Your site was great in my humble opinion.
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The blue you chose to match the graphics on your sign looks very good but why not consider one of the gray tones in the roof as your border colors.
Also, you photo, you may want to update it with something with a plain background.
Geri
http://www.g2taylor.com
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Pls checkout www.ElitePrefabHomes.com and let me know what you think of it. Thank You for your time.
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Hi;

Your website is full of good information. However, may I suggest that you change your AdChoices ads to another color. I think that color blue takes away from the rest of your website page. Either slow the pictures down or use a nice picture in its place. I could not read your information from looking at how fast your pictures are going and watching the sign next to it saying “It's Magic.” I would consider taking the black frame from the section that says Home, Blog, etc.... Tone down the orange color and whatever color you choose, try to match up the AdChoices with that color. Make the fonts larger, and "Fast and Easy" should be the same color as the section that says "Home as well."

Again, the info is great, the pictures at the bottom is also great. I would consider toning the pictures down just a little. The pictures are much larger than the text. I love your title and symbol at the end of the first page. I think it would look great at the top of your webpage. It looks classy and shows strength and a great sense of character about your company.

Your final comment should be at the end of the first page. Once you tell a person to click here to contact us, people may not read the rest of the information below that.

It would be nice if your links could be highlighted so people will know which link they clicked on.
All your texts should have the same font and size unless you want to bring attention to something in particular. Your link on “FAQ” is nice and well written. I would suggest however, that you take the bold off and keep the font and text the same as the rest of the website.

I like where you placed your company’s symbol on the price link. It would be great if you had that same symbol at the same place on each of your links. Please do not take the information I suggested as tearing down your wonderful site. Like me, we need help and suggestion from our Homestead community to help our business to be successful. I am sure you can look at my site and give me good suggestion as well. We are helpers of one another. The suggestions I made is just that, my suggestions. I could be wrong and off key. Take bits and pieces you can use and throw the rest away... be blessed. Linda
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I agree with Linda.
Choose your best photo as a still and make it larger.
Geri
http://www.g2taylor.com
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Would like some feedback on my website:

http://www.live-better-holistic-lifes...

Thank you!
Johanna
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NICE NICE NICE,,, Did you build this yourself? Great job, great keywords!
Very nice pages and it flows well.

adam b

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I think it is great. I did not have time to read everything but I liked it on FB and will be back to check it out later!
Geri
http://www.g2taylor.com
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Johanna;

I love your website. I think however, your suggestions were not for my website.

I am Linda Wiggins, so I assumed it was suggested to me. If not, please visit my website for suggestions at www.4ourkids.org. Thanks.....
Hey I just look at your web site I think it's great.
Ameer.....
www.smoovemovingservicellc.com
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I only had a chance to give it a quick glance but the fact that it made quite a first impression was great and memorable.
Geri
http://www.g2taylor.com
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Opps! Sorry, I put my comment in the wrong place :)

Your website is beautiful. Can't think of anything to change on it. Good job!!
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Thank you so much. I have requested suggestions several days ago. I have received no suggestions from any member. I would like to have other members of the community to view my site at www.4ourkids.org as well. Again thanks, your website is beautiful as well.
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I like this site. I think it is nice. You have a great choice of keywords, are you going for a national presence or a local presence?
Adams Auto Detail

www.oregonautodetail.com

keywords:
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I have 2 sites, please take a look.

www.fortsonphotography.com
and
www.duanelongphoto.com

Thanks in advance
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I like duanelongphoto.com much better, however, you have a lot of wasted space.
Tighten it up and you can get more information visible to the public without them having to scroll so far down the page.
Geri
http://www.g2taylor.com
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Thank you Geri
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Really looking for some advice on how to improve this site. I dont need any positive feedback, you do not need to be nice. Thank You for being honest.

www.oregonautodetail.com
MY KEYWORDS ARE:
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